【口语】2021第二季度Part2素材:不太成功的经历(新)

发布于 2021-06-19 12:02

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关于“减肥”,其实不少人有误区:=(#>д<)ノ
 
比如当下耳熟能详的概念——BMI,也就是BMI超过25就算超重,超过30就算肥胖症。但其实,这个 标准是不适合亚洲人的,据说亚洲人需要把25上调到28这个数值。并且,BMI这个概念也有些粗糙,因为只适合测试成年人小孩子和老年人,还有职业运动员都不符合,这些人要不就是身体指标在剧烈变化,要不就是肌肉含量超高,体重明显大。
 
对于“减肥态度”,不少经验人士给出的建议是:
 
对自己有良好的控制但又不需要刻意控制,有什么好吃的吃点也行,不吃也行
生活不走极端,不沉迷,该做的很自然地就去做,这才是真正的自由呀!
 
毕竟嘴上和行动上很在意自己的体重,这也不敢吃,那也不敢吃,一天到晚饿着。
表面上拒绝食物,实际满脑子想着的都是实物,这是多么磨人呀!(〃>皿<)



好啦,话不多说,现在,让我们掌声有请今天的相关P2话题啦:


Describe a time when you tried to do something but was not very successful 


老规矩:话题拿到手,向前4步走!


第一步:审题。


(1) 话题类型:a time ——事件/经历类

对于我们来说, 哪类话题其实不那么重要,只要①内容不偏题;且能②把素材恰当地放入话题即可。


(2) 限定词: you; tried to do something; not very successful——你尝试去做但没太成功的事情


由于考试不讲究“真实性”,因为没有“此答案是真是假”的评分项

哪怕不是你尝试做的,你也可以把你朋友的类似经历放在自己身上,但是一定要有真实感哦!

 

不过限定词一定要看清楚,因为考官要求考生给出relevant answer

 

(3) 背景信息:when; what; why


提醒:考官建议全部回答哦,但如果你少回答,乱序回答,其实也没什么大问题;毕竟

这些都是很基础的背景信息,你基本都是需要提及的。

 

(4) 重要一问: felt


由于这个话题,需要套万能素材,所以我准备这样说:

 

故事:我曾经尝试去减肥,但失败了;后来我分析原因,请教了其他朋友,发现自己缺少的是毅力。后来也认识到了坚持的重要性。(你也可以说:后来,我每天坚持做20个俯卧撑,结合饮食;果然慢慢瘦了很多。)

 

素材:减肥+坚持

 

(详情参见B站视频或下文解析哦~)


第二步:判断时态 (技巧:找谓语动词)



(1) 标题:

Tried- past tense


(2) 三小问:

Was - past tense

tried- past tense

Was - past tense


(3) 重要一问:

Felt - past tense

 

总结:这个P2主要是过去时态( past tense )。

 

在过去时态使用较多的情况下,建议大家把会用到的past tense verb写在笔记本上哦!

因为past tense 能力是衡量语法单项6分的重要标准。

 

但,如果你本文已非常熟练,平时练背口语也没有明显的时态错误,也可以不用写。

大部分学生,稳妥起见,还是写下来提醒自己哦!



第三步:插入框架及话术。

1)  Well,thank you for the cue card(老师发给你的小卡片); l will make use of(利用)the questions on the card.然后用自己的话,逐一回答 3 个小问题。


2)  Now, let’s get down to business and focus on(切入正题并集中到) the last question (念出最后一问,注意改人称you - I ) I’ve got two main reasons/ one big reason/ my reason for it is pretty obvious(根据不同的话题筛选不同的话术).

To begin with(体现逻辑和连贯性), 观点1... Additionally, 观点2...


3)  Well, that’s why/how 重复念一遍最后一问and that’s pretty much everything I have. Thank you for your time(体现礼貌和尊重).


第四步:加入背景信息。

(1)Background information (针对小三问;此处只需简单描述,重点是后面的素材运用):
 
When - When I was in high school...
What - I joined in a weight loss program, containing some diet plans and exercise programs. Because I was suffered from being mocked at.
 
When I was in high school, I used to be pretty fat. Just running a few
hundred meters would make me breathless. Some of my classmates teased me about my weight every now and then, and I became the laughing stock. I was really fed up with being mocked at, so I almost decided to drop out of school.  
 
Why - I failed and quit the program in the middle due to the lack of persistence. I had set impossible goals, that was also why I was guaranteed to fail.
 
注意:当你发现三小问中有重合的答案,直接结合起来,汇总成一句话即可。不需要讲三遍哦!
 
(详情参见B站视频或下文解析哦~)
 
(2)Felt (针对最后一问):
 
首先,我觉得健身或者减肥,都是需要坚持的一件事。
之前我一看到好吃的,我就去买了;包括家里也一直放着很多零食,这也是为什么我很难抵制美食的诱惑的原因。我决定以后要排除一切干扰,比如设置适合自己的减肥目标,把零食都收起来等等,这些能让我更容易坚持下去。
 
I had no resistance in front of snacks.
Every time I saw ads of junk food, I would go and buy it.
No matter how committed I was, having something unhealthy in front of my face was only going to make things harder.
 
I should have set reasonable goals, like 1 pound per week.
 
所以还蛮自责和后悔的(Regretful),包括我那些减肥成功的朋友们,也告诉了我坚持的重要性。
 
My friend told me that life is all about how much you can take and keep fighting, how much you can suffer and keep moving forward. Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out, and there is no substitute for these smalefforts. Don't be discouraged when things are tough. It's often the last key in the bunch that opens the lock.  
 
今年暑假,我打算再试一次。
I really want to give a shot this summer.


Tips:


①由于我们在努力将两个素材套用到所有话题中,所以有时候,是需要轻微改动的,这样才才能让素材更贴近话题。建议大家最好去听B站的完整视频讲解哦!
 
②最后第四步:补充信息时,用自己最朴实简单的语言,支撑起内容和流利度即可。
一能大大降低大家的准备难度,二是因为逻辑,词汇和语法,在我们的下面的素材和上面的话术中已经体现啦~
 
From XXX, I learned that life is all about how much you can take and keep fighting, how much you can suffer and keep moving forward. Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out, and there is no substitute for these smalefforts. Don't be discouraged when things are tough. It's often the last key in the bunch that opens the lock.
 
(1) 从句+排比:that; how much; when
(2) 发音技巧: all about; sum of; small efforts; dont be (失爆)
(3) 地道表达:repeated day in and day out; there is no substitute
(4) 重音:keep fighting; moving forward; no substitute; discouraged; last key; opens the lock
 
从这个...中,我学会了:其实生活的真谛就在于你能否坚持。不管多痛苦,你能不能扛过去,继续前进。成功不是一蹴而就的,都是小努力汇聚而成,并且没有捷径,必须要脚踏实地的努力。最后,如果你正经历着痛苦,也请不要灰心丧气。因为往往再坚持一小下,胜利的曙光就会洒在你身上。
 
When I was in high school, I used to be pretty fat. Just running a few
hundred meters would make me breathless. Some of my classmates teased me about my weight every now and then, and I became the laughing stock. I was really fed up with being mocked at, so I almost decided to drop out of school.  Later.…...Miraculously, I lost nearly 20 pounds, and I became more confident thereafterAnyway, I am and will always be grateful to XXX.
 
(1) 语法:when; running a few ...made...;so;
(2) 地道表达:every now and then/againlaughing stock;be fed up with;be mocked; miraculously
(3) 连贯性:later; thereafter; anyway
(4) 发音:when I; u; really; more; always ,some of; fed up
 
其实,我上高中的时候,特别特别胖。有时候跑个几百米,我都气喘吁吁,很难受。我的有些同学,时不时会嘲笑我的体重,我成了他们的笑柄。我当时真的很难过,也很讨厌被嘲笑的感觉,甚至都想过要辍学了。幸运的是,后来我减肥成功了,瘦了20磅。也越来越自信了。说实话,我真的很感谢当初的。。。。(自己、朋友、某件事、某个物体等,根据具体话题变换。)


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